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#26 Old 19th Mar 2009 at 8:14 AM
Nice story!

I've never played the premade families before, yet I always enjoy the stories about them. Go figure
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Mad Poster
#27 Old 19th Mar 2009 at 5:08 PM
Quote: Originally posted by danirawr
Nice story!

I've never played the premade families before, yet I always enjoy the stories about them. Go figure

The only premade ones I ever played were Broke and Pleasants. Others never intrested me >_>
Field Researcher
#28 Old 19th Mar 2009 at 9:04 PM
Great update. That was a cute proposal and as kyle said the last comment was pretty funny :D
Lab Assistant
#29 Old 19th Mar 2009 at 11:21 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Kyle
Amazing chapter last comment just made me laugh keep it hun :D

Haha me too! Like she didnt totally plan it! Great update! I like your sims by the way, you made them look sooo pretty!
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#30 Old 20th Mar 2009 at 1:47 AM
Quote: Originally posted by Kyle
The only premade ones I ever played were Broke and Pleasants. Others never intrested me >_>


I actually enjoy playing all of them especially the Burb and the Goth. I can never make a custom neighborhood, though. I make them super perfect people and they get boring after a while. haha.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#31 Old 20th Mar 2009 at 1:59 AM
Thank you! I try to be as animated as I can. The long chapter about Bella made me depressed. And I'm the writer! I didn't mean for this one to be funny but I can see why you all would think so once I read it over thanks!
#32 Old 20th Mar 2009 at 4:30 AM
Nice! started reading ur story, it's so entertaining and funny lol ugh that pervy mortimer.
Nice screenshots too ^^
Scholar
#33 Old 20th Mar 2009 at 7:35 AM
Yay, I love all of this story!
Pleasantview rocks. I'm currently trying to get to gen. 3 wiv all of the families. Might be hard :P

Call me Meg

lately i want everything
every star tied to a string

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Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#34 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 7:48 AM Last edited by BriMia : 25th Sep 2009 at 11:50 PM.
Default CH05 The Night In
Chapter 5 - The Night In




"Finally, Beau is asleep." Dustin whispers to his girlfriend.
He has invited Angela over for a little movie night after
he found out his mom was going out for the night,





"Can you believe mom fed him a whole piece of cheesecakes
before she left? The kid got all crazy, jumping around
everywhere. I think he drank water from the toilet, too."

"That's so cute! Haha.. But the toilet part, kinda gross," Angela giggles.





"We cleaned him up nice though. Thank God." Dustin sighs
as he throws himself down on the couch in his room, "Now I’m
tired. Let’s watch a movie. What've we got?"





"Hmm... We have Coconut Express, Cricket Man 2, How to Lose a…"

"All of the boys and all of the girls are begging to if you se…"
The music comes from Angela's phone in her skirt pocket.

Angela answers her phone. Putting one hand over the speaker,
she turns to Dustin, "My new ringtone. You like it baby?"








"Yo, I need a place to hang," the voice on the other side of the line yells
out. "Dirk says he has to do this project for his bio class or whatever."

"Why are you asking me?" Angela pauses, "Mom and dad are fighting again huh?"





"Yeah. I don’t really care anymore. I’m
getting out of this hell hole. Where you at?"





"Why would I tell you? You humiliate me in front of everyone whenever we hang out, Lily."
"Ugh stop calling me Lily, bitch."
"I'll stop calling you Lily if you stop calling me bitch."
"Not gonna happen."
"Then I’ll call you whatever I want… bitch."
"What was that??"

"Nothing... I'm at Dustin's. His mom is out tonight. I think you
can come over… if you really want," says Angela. She already
regrets the invitation but she can't turn away her sister. Her
annoyingly manipulative sister. Turning to her boyfriend,
she says, "She can come over right honey?"





"Yeah, sure. That's fine with me. She can watch Beau while we watch
the movies," Dustin replies. He doesn't want Lilith ruining his night
with Angela. But he doesn't want to cross Angela either (whipped much?).

"Alright Lilith, come over."





"Yeah, you so want me there. We're gonna have sooo much fun."





"Whatever. Bye."

Oh Angela, you should've known better...
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I hope you all enjoy this chapter. I don't know who to write for the
next chapter yet. I'll probably finish up this chapter but I don't know
after that. Maybe the Dreamer or the Lothario or the Pleasant parents?
And as always, thanks for following along!
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#35 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 7:58 AM
Quote: Originally posted by meggie272
Yay, I love all of this story!
Pleasantview rocks. I'm currently trying to get to gen. 3 wiv all of the families. Might be hard :P


I've done that before once! Lol. The storyline kinda blurred out but I like seeing the offsprings of these characters! I'm trying to get to at least second generation with this story.
Scholar
#36 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 12:05 PM
Ooooh, Lilith & Angela. I was looking forward to that.
And I can't wait to see where you take Darren. He's like my favourite.

Call me Meg

lately i want everything
every star tied to a string

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Mad Poster
#37 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 5:14 PM
Oh wow I'm not used to see Dustin with Angela any more I'm curious about Darren Really am. Also pleasant parents seem to be very interesting to find out about them...
Inventor
#38 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 6:24 PM
aaarrrggghhhh this is SO SO GOOD! MAORE UPDATTES, and fast!
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#39 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 11:22 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Kyle
Oh wow I'm not used to see Dustin with Angela any more I'm curious about Darren Really am. Also pleasant parents seem to be very interesting to find out about them...


Haha yes! I've read your story And Darren will probably show up in a couple of chapters.
Field Researcher
#40 Old 21st Mar 2009 at 11:33 PM
He is so whipped lol. Great update.
Test Subject
#41 Old 22nd Mar 2009 at 12:05 AM
LOL, Angela's look in that last pic is priceless.
Test Subject
#42 Old 24th Mar 2009 at 9:33 PM
Great update, I love how you write your story

Can't wait to see what happens next :P
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#43 Old 28th Mar 2009 at 8:36 AM
Default CH05 (Part II)
Chapter 5 - The Night In Part II



"Look who's here, bitches!"

"Shhh! Beau is asleep. And you've got to stop cussing." Angela whispers.

"Oh, but I can't dear sister," exclaims Lilith in her sister's voice.
"I've got an image thing I gotta protect."

"Ugh, what image? And because you interrupted my plan for the
night Lilith, you get to watch the baby in case he wakes up."





"What?? What are you guys gonna do then? Each other?"
"Hey! For your information, we're watching movies."
"Great! What did you rent?"
"It doesn't matter because you're not joining us."





"But… What will I do? The baby is already asleep!"
"I don't know. Figure it out." Angela turns to her
boyfriend as they walk back into his room, "Let's go honey."

---Fifteen Short Minutes Later---




"Yo, what are you watching?" whispers Lilith as peaks her
head into the Dustin's room, "Whoa, Coconut Express?!
I wanted to watch that!" She settles on the floor in front of couch.
"The baby is up by the way. Someone should go check it out."





"WHAT?!" Angela screamed at Lilith who looks ever so casual. "Ugh! Lilith!"

"Whaaat"

Dustin sighs, “It's alright, Angela. I'll go check on him. It's no big deal.”





What is it about these two sisters? They love each other one
day and want to kill each other the next.





Dustin would never fight with Beau when he grows up.
He’s going to teach his brother how to play basketball,
play pranks on teachers, get the ladies…





"Beau!! Buwuhaah. Are you serious?? Man. All this from a baby!"

Baby Beau giggles.





I spoke too soon.

After washing his brother up and tucking him back into bed,
Dustin enters his room to find Lilith on her way out.





"Hey Dustin, did you know Angela ate her own boogers when
she was a baby? I’ve got pictures if you wanna see."
Exiting the room, Lilith winked at Angela,
"Be good, Angie. Keep it PG tonight."

Dumbfounded, Dustin utters, "What was that all about?"





"I think I might have to stay with you tonight Dustin."
Angela stares blankly at the wall in front of her,
"My mom just caught Daddy cheating on her with the maid."

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Thank you for all the nice comments. I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
It's a bit long. Next chapter coming up really soon. Stay tuned.
Field Researcher
#44 Old 28th Mar 2009 at 10:07 AM
oh jeeze craziness great update.
Scholar
#45 Old 28th Mar 2009 at 10:49 AM
Oooooh, poor Mary
I loved the Angela and Lilith dialogue. You're a great writer, every chapter gets better :P

Call me Meg

lately i want everything
every star tied to a string

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Lab Assistant
#46 Old 28th Mar 2009 at 10:44 PM
ooo great update, i love the way you tell angela and liliths story! Cant wait for more!
Mad Poster
#47 Old 29th Mar 2009 at 12:35 AM
Love the rivalary :D

Amazing chapter
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#48 Old 4th Apr 2009 at 10:28 AM Last edited by BriMia : 26th Sep 2009 at 12:07 AM.
Default CH06 The Gallery
Aww I'm glad you all love the Angela-Lilith dynamics.
Unfortunately, they won't show up together for a little while.
PS: I had some technical issues with my Apartment Life CD
so I am playing without it until i find a solution.
This doesn't matter in this chapter though, so we're cool.

________________________________________

Chapter 6 - The Gallery




"Cassandra, hold still," Darren Dreamer tries to concentrate on his subject.

"I'm loving this wig. Do you think I look better as a blonde Darren?"

"Cassandra.."





"I'm tired, Darren. Can we go grab a bite after this? I'm so hungry"

"Cass, stop moving."

"Fine," Cassandra pouts at the artist.





She yawns.

“Cassandra Goth, you know what? It is getting dark
out anyways and I think we’re finished for the day.”
Darren sighs, finally putting down his brush with the
help of his uncooperative model.





“Finally!”

Cassandra Goth has been modeling for her best friend, Darren Dreamer, for
a while now that she has quit her job as a field researcher at her old university.
She was sick of following her father’s footstep in the science field. None of
the scholars respected her because of the privilege that came with her name.





It is now Cassandra’s time to use that privilege.
Why work if she has all the money to last a lifetime?
It was time that Cassandra gets to live the life that
she was born into, the life that her mother had lived.





And the life of Cassandra Goth couldn’t be better.
She's moving in with her fiancé, Don Lothario, and
they're going to have the most elegant wedding of the year.





"Ivy!!!" Darren yells out for his assistant, Ivy Copur,
who comes running into the painting room, exhausted,
"Will you please close up the gallery today?
Cassandra and I are leaving a bit early."

"Sure thing, Darren"

"I promise I’ll hire some more help around here next week, okay?"

"Really? Thanks boss!" Ivy never complains. That's why she's
such a good assistant. Plus, the huge paychecks don't hurt either.

“No problem, Ivy.”





Turning to his model, “Now go change, dummy, so we can go get food."
"Ahh. Alright alright alright,” She giggles.





"Oh we're stopping by my place later alright? I have
something for you. You know, an early wedding gift."





"A present? You’re the best Darren!"
Second best if we really want to be honest.
________________________________________

Hope you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you all for the feedback!
I'm currently writing chapter 7. I know the story is pretty slow right now but
I promise it'll will pick up after the next couple of chapters. So stay tuned!
Field Researcher
#49 Old 4th Apr 2009 at 7:35 PM
Awww she looks pretty as a blonde maybe ill make mine blonde lol. Great update.
Mad Poster
#50 Old 5th Apr 2009 at 12:02 AM
I like it xD

I never played with goths much >_>
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