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#51 Old 29th May 2006 at 5:20 PM
I know who the daddy is hahahahaha
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#52 Old 30th May 2006 at 8:09 AM
I really really reeeaaally hope it isn't Jamal's baby

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#53 Old 30th May 2006 at 10:41 AM
Its going to make life difficulty for the two of them if the baby is Jamel's

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#54 Old 30th May 2006 at 3:30 PM
I want another update!! :D

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#55 Old 30th May 2006 at 7:04 PM
I'm gonna be REALLY mad if it is Jamel's.

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#56 Old 30th May 2006 at 9:22 PM
ok ok ok, i'll let you all know who the daddy is. the daddy is.....................................
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


-EDIT-

ok, ok. the daddy is............... the person that it is, haha
#57 Old 7th Jun 2006 at 7:31 AM
I'd be p*ssed if the baby wasn't Devonte's.
#58 Old 8th Jun 2006 at 3:03 AM
hey i just started reading your story and girllllll let me tell you this is soooo good i can't believe that fool jamel raped heavyn!!!!! boy..... i'll tell ya this is some crazy stuff but i love it don't stop writing

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#59 Old 27th Jun 2006 at 3:24 PM
Default Chapter 8
Thank you for all comments and i'm sorry for the delayed update.

“Wake up. We here” Uniqua said nudging Heavyn. Heavyn opened her eyes to see a huge building with high fences. She had never been to a jail before and was quite frightened.

“Have your picture ID ready and please take all metal things out of your pockets and put them in this bin” A huge brawly man was announcing to the crowd of people have come to see loved ones. Heavyn looked at the man and did as she was told. She felt so sick to her stomach that her body started shaking. She wasn’t cold but she was shivering.

“It’ll be alright Heavyn. Don’t worry.” Uniqua’s voice comforted Heavyn. It made her feel as though she wasn’t alone.

“Visitors for Devonte Rodriguez” Uniqua got up instantly and pulled Heavyn with her.


“It’s about damn time, **** we been sittin her for over an hour!” The guard ignored Uniqua’s comment and escorted the two ladies to the visitation rooms. There were so many people here. Heavyn looked around and saw so many young boys. All she saw was lost dreams, young black boys that have been caught up in something. She turned her head to look forward and saw the most inviting smile.

Devonte was just standing there mesmerized. He kept looking at her and thinking about how much he loved her. He was quickly snapped out of his dream when he remembered that he was in jail and Heavyn was seeing him at his worst. He put his head down in embarrassment. Heavyn walked up to him and lifted his head with one finger.

“It don’t matter to me baby. I still love you like no other.” Devonte looked into her deep brown eyes and leaned in to kiss her.



“HEY HEY HEY!!!” The guard yelled. “You know the rules”

Devonte pulled back and whispered “no kissing”

“Come on ya’ll sit down. Let’s talk and catch up.” Uniqua was trying to break the ice. They all sat down and Uniqua filled Devonte in on what has been going on since he left. They were talking and laughing so much that they lost track of time. Uniqua looked up at the clock and saw that they had 15 minutes left. “I’ma go to the bathroom. I’ll be right back.” Uniqua got up and disappeared in the back.

“I’m so glad you came baby. This means a lot to me.” Devonte said as he rubbed her hand. “I know I messed up but don’t give up on me. When I get out we gonna get married, I’ma get a real job and we are gonna start our family. Just like we always wanted to.



Heavyn pulled her hand back slowly and said “What if that order was reversed? What if the baby came before the marriage and job?”

“What are you saying? You pregnant?” Devonte looked at Heavyn. She just had her head down and didn’t say anything. “Heavyn?” Devonte took a huge sigh “Damn … I didn’t want this to happen under these circumstances… You gonna keep it right?”

“I don’t know. I mean I have no way to support the baby and with you in here what am I supposed to do? I know when I tell my mother she is gonna flip. (sigh) They might even kick me out. And if they do that what am I gonna do?”

“Don’t worry bout all of that. I’ll make a few calls and have you set until I get out. I’ll do as much as I can. I’ll do anything.”

“Make a few calls *chuckle chuckle* At what price? What will you owe in return for these calls? Devonte all I want is to be with you. But I want the American dream. I don’t ever want to see you in this place again. If we decide that we will keep the baby, I’ll do what I have to do until you get out of jail. The right way. No short cuts.”

“Whatever we gotta do we gonna do it. I really want you to keep it. But I will understand if you choose not to. I mean I do have two years up here. But whatever you choose. We will do it your way. I promise.”

“Thank you baby.” They gave each other a quick hug. While Uniqua came back

“They kickin us out already. But you know I’ll be back next week right?” She said as she kissed her son on the cheek.

“Yea ma. Don’t forget to bring them Jordans next time either. You know I gots ta stay fly” Everyone let out a little laugh.

The whole ride home Heavyn sat and contemplated what Devonte had just said to her. She wanted to start a family with him but not so soon. And how would she tell her parents? What would they do when they found out? She decided not to think about it, she saw her baby today and that was enough to put a smile on her face.



Sitting on the couch watching TV Heavyn began thinking about the baby. If her calculations were right she slept with Devonte about 3 months ago. She knew she had to go to the doctor because whether or not if she was gonna keep the baby she still had to get checked out. She sat back and started crying. The thought that the father of the baby could either be the love of her life’s or the man whom she most despised. “What’s wrong with you?” Ayliah was standing there watching her big sister cry her eyes out.

“Nothing princess” Heavyn tried to muster up a smile. Ayliah was her little girl. She was 11 and was a little diva. She always made Heavyn smile.

“Well miss nothin’ someone is on the phone for you.” Ayliah said there with her hand on her hips. “Want me to bring the phone to you?”

“What you think? You know I aint getting up” Heavyn let out a little giggle.

“You see why I don’t be nice to you?” Ayliah giggled along. She came back in the room and gave Heavyn the phone but not before she stuck her tongue out at her.



Smiling from ear to ear Heavyn answered the phone. “Hello?” she said waiting for the person to respond.

“Um hi” a soft spoken person said.

“Oh hi quita”

“I know you probably never wanted to speak to me again but I just called to tell you that honestly from the bottom of my heart, I’m sorry. I didn’t think none of this would have went that far. Everything that I did was so stupid and I didn’t mean to hurt you that bad. I love you. You were and always will be my best friend. Tu eres mi prima, te amo mucho.”

There was a long silence.

“Heavyn? You still there?”

“Yea I’m here. Just thinking. You know I have been thinking about you since that day. I love you so much and I would have never thought you would concoct up such a plan that would scar me for the rest of my life. I mean exactly what you said tu eres mi prima. How in the world could you let someone rape me? I’m your blood Quita!”

“I didn’t know he raped you. Honestly. When I did that thing with Devonte I had no clue as to what had happened between you and Jamel. I mean I know ya’ll wasn’t talking but I didn’t know that he raped you. And he aint tell me until ya’ll left that day. I didn’t know…I really didn’t”

Heavyn could hear the sincerity in her voice. All of a sudden she could hear whimpers over the phone.

“I’m so sorry Heavyn. I didn’t mean for this to happen. I was so jealous of you and I let my jealousy get the best of me. I just want to be your friend again. I’m going through so much right now and you are the only person who I can think of to talk to.”

“I did have a lot of hate and anger towards you but a whole three months have past and I’m dealing with it. Devonte called me yesterday and told me about the letter you sent him. He still has some animosity towards you but not as bad as before. Both of us just want to put what happened the past behind us. I love you and miss you. I want to see you. My life has really got me on a roller coaster. I don’t know if I’m coming or going… um do you want to hang out tomorrow? Maybe get a bite to eat of something?”

“Sure, I would love to. Around 4 is good?”

“Yea 4 is perfect. Lets go to that McDonalds on fulton. I’ll meet you there at 4.”

“Ok I’ll see you there.”

“Ok bye”

Heavyn could not believe that he had just spoken to TaQuita. She was actually looking forward to someone she could talk to.

#60 Old 27th Jun 2006 at 4:58 PM
Nice update, I'm glad they're at least willing to work things out

*side bar...where did you get Heavyn's hair in the last pic from?*
#61 Old 27th Jun 2006 at 6:47 PM
Good update cinn. I love this story, Heavyn is so pretty. Breena the hair is a donation from rose sims.
#62 Old 27th Jun 2006 at 8:09 PM
Thanks Zizism-...I mean Dee
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#63 Old 27th Jun 2006 at 8:27 PM
She looks so pretty in that last pic. What a nice update
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#64 Old 27th Jun 2006 at 8:45 PM
Thank you Breena, Dee and Ladyswig. I glad you all like it. Hopefully i can get another update up before the end of the week.
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#65 Old 30th Jun 2006 at 7:18 AM
Default Chapter 9
The next day Heavyn got to McDonald’s a half hour early so she could prepare herself. But when she got there TaQuita was already there. When they saw each other both of them started crying. TaQuita walked over to Heavyn and Heavyn just broke down even more. People were looking at them strangely but they didn’t care. They were ion their own little world. They sat down and talked about things that have been going on with them in the past three months. To them it seemed like three whole years had passed.

“I have something to tell you Quita. But you have to promise not to tell anyone.”

“I promise chica. What is it?”

“I’m pregnant. I think I’m around 3 months. But I’m not sure if it’s Devonte’s or if its Jamel’s. I told Devonte about the baby and he wants me to keep it. But I don’t want to raise Jamel’s baby.”


TaQuita just sat there quiet. She had no clue as to what to say. “Did you tell Devonte that there was a possibility that Jamel was the father?”

“No, I’m scared. I was gonna write it in a letter before its too late for me to get an abortion but I don’t know. I think he is gonna flip out.” Heavyn began to get worried.

“It aint like you cheated on him. He knows what happened between you two.” TaQuita was trying to sound reassuring.

“Yea I guess you right. Well let me get home. Mommy and Daddy ‘possed ta be goin out tonight. I have to watch that rugrat” Heavyn grabbed up her things. The two girls embraced and went their separate ways.


June 5
Dear Devonte,
I can’t believe that is has already been 4 months since you have been gone. I miss you so much baby. I can’t wait until you come home. I really enjoyed our last visit and I’m sorry for not answering your phone calls or writing you back. I am kinda confused about things and I didn’t want to trouble you. But after thinking about it I have to come clean. I hope you don’t turn your back on us now and remember I think I still have a little time to get an abortion if you decide you don’t want it. But here it is. I was thinking and if I’m not mistaken the baby might not be yours. All of this happened around the same thing as the incident with Jamel. It makes me wonder if the baby could be his. I know this isn’t what was in our dreams and if you want me to I will get an abortion. I just want to live happily ever after with you and this baby might not allow that to come true. I need to know what you think of all of this.

Love your Wifey,
Heavyn

June 14
Heavyn,
Baby girl, don’t you know I know everything. When you first told me that you were pregnant I knew there was a possibility that the baby wasn’t mine. But what did I say anyways, that I want it. It’s gonna be a part of you, and I love you. And who knows it might just be mine. I want a little ‘Vonte jr. runnin around. Don’t worry about nothing Heavyn, Everything will work itself out. Trust me.

Love you always,
Devonte



*Ring, Ring* “Hello?” a groggy voice answered.
“Hi, Ms. Uniqua?” Heavyn said really anxious.
Sitting up on the bed now “Oh hi Heavyn whats goin on?
“I just came from the doctor and called to give you my weekly report.”
“I’m all ears…How is my grand child doin?” Uniqua was getting excited now. Heavyn was already showing and the reality of having a grandchild really intrigued her.
“Well, the doctor said that I’m 22 weeks and I’m doing great. The baby is healthy and all. And no I didn’t find out the sex. I want it to be a surprise.” Heavyn was secretly getting excited.

“Aww you just love keeping me in suspense. So have you told your mother yet?”

“No, I’m trying to find the right time. You have no idea how my father is. He grew up in a very religious Puerto Rican household. His mother instilled all of her values into my father.”

“Sweety, I understand that but you damn near about to have the baby. He will just have to get over it.” Uniqua was getting a little fed up with Heavyn. She could not understand why she was acting the way she was. Although Uniqua had never met Heavyn’s parents she could not imagine them to be that bad. And the way things were going it didn’t look like Heavyn was going to tell her parents at all.

“I am Ms. Uniqua don’t worry” Heavyn sat on the bed while still talking to Uniqua. All of a sudden her bedroom door flew open.




“Yo! Mommy wants you down stairs.”

“Where’s ya’ damn manners? I had mah door closed for a reason!” Heavyn turns around facing the window “I’ma have to call you later…ok…bye…yea tell him I love him too…ok” She hung up the phone. Then turning to her little sister “What I told you about knockin’”

“Oh pa-leeze you know mommy told you if you wasn’t payin no bills you aint supposed to have doors closed anyways”

“Well I don’t go in your room so don’t go in mine.” Heavyn sat there wondering “So what does mommy want?”

Sucking her teeth “I don’t know. She all upset, cryin and stuff.”



“Heavyn! Come here!!!” Evelyn screamed from the top of her lungs.

“I’m comin!” Heavyn rushed out the room to her mother. “What happened?”

“Quita told you she was pregnant?” Evelyn was standing there with her hands on her hips.

Heavyn just stood there dumb founded. She and TaQuita had been talking for about a month now and she thought things were back to normal. Why hadn’t TaQuita told her? “No mommy she aint say nothing to me” Heavyn couldn’t help but to wonder why TaQuita held this secret. Then she wondered who the father was? TaQuita wasn’t an innocent little girl and had a few partners in her 17 years living.

“Well Eve called me and told me she took that lyin heifer to the doctor and she in her second trimester. Can you believe that? She been hidin something like that. Girl I swear, if you ever pull some S*** like that I will kill you. And I aint playin.” Evelyn walked over to the kitchen she then turned around “And don’t hang out with her that much no more. Pregnancy is contagious. Knownin’ you, you would probably try and get pregnant on purpose so ya’ll kids can grow up together. I’m telling you now. Havin a baby aint cute and it aint no fun!”

“Dang mommy I know.” Heavyn started getting scared. She didn’t know what to do anymore. The way her mother was flipping she knew she could not tell her that she too was pregnant. “Well I’m gonna go to the store you want something?”



“No baby but hurry back” Her mother said as she began to prepare dinner. Heavyn walked out the house and started her way to the store. She didn’t really want anything from the store but she had to get out the house. She had to figure out a way to tell her parents that she was pregnant also. She couldn’t think of anything off the top of her head. All of a sudden she gets startled by her cell phone.

“Hello?” she answered with her voice still a little shaky. “Yea mommy, I’m on my way back now” She took a deep sigh. She knew that sooner or later her mother would find out her secret.

Heavyn had yet to realize that her stomach was steadily growing and her mother had taken very close watch of her. After dinner that night Evelyn went into Heavyn’s room to talk to her.

“You know what I hate Heavyn?” Evelyn sat on the chair trying to pick and choose her words carefully. “I hate it when my children keep secrets from me” Evelyn sat and looked at Heavyn as she was now squirming in her seat. She kept trying to calm herself, hoping that her suspicions were not true. “Have you ever kept something from me?” She looked at Heavyn. “If you don’t tell me I can’t help you. You know mommy is always here for you.”

Heavyn began to cry. She knew this was the chance to tell her mother. She was so scared; she just knew mother would hate her for the rest of her life. “Ma, you know what happened to Taquita, um what would you do if that was one of your kids?” Heavyn said as she rubbed her hands together.

“Ha! I would beat that a**! You know that. You tryin ta’ tell me sumthin? Why would you ask a question like that?” Evelyn was getting close to her answer but she wasn’t lying before. She really hates it when her children keep secrets. She feels as though she can’t trust them “Cuz the way you soundin I might assume that you are pregnant too”

Heavyn just cried harder. “I’m so sorry, I don’t know what happened. So many things were going on. And before I knew it I had missed my period…I’m so sorry mommy. I didn’t know what to do”

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#66 Old 30th Jun 2006 at 7:31 AM
Wow - Great update. I liked all the jail shots

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#67 Old 30th Jun 2006 at 8:45 PM
Aww Heavyn
#68 Old 30th Jun 2006 at 9:29 PM
Great update, Heavyn is so pretty and sweet...just hope Mommy tries to understand a little bit and not kill her! :P
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#69 Old 1st Jul 2006 at 8:00 AM
Aww I'm sure Heavyn will be alright
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#70 Old 1st Jul 2006 at 11:20 AM
Great update again! I loved the letter Devonte wrote her. It brought a bit of tears to my eyes, he's so sweet. :P

I hope Heavyn's mom will forgive her, and try helping her instead of getting angry with her.

"Euphobia- Fear of hearing good news."
Doctor: Good news - you are completely healthy!
Patient: NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! [collapses and dies of chok]

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#71 Old 1st Jul 2006 at 5:38 PM
Great Story,Cinnamin316!!May I ask where you got these beautiful dark skintones?
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#72 Old 1st Jul 2006 at 6:00 PM
Thank you all for the comments. I'm working on the new pictures now. I have to build a lot and i need to find the right objects for it.

Kajefan- I got most of my skintones from Louis.
#73 Old 6th Jul 2006 at 5:50 AM
I hope Heavyn's mom will forgive her, and try helping her instead of getting angry with her.
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#74 Old 6th Jul 2006 at 3:51 PM
I agree with islandprincess. I hope she doesn't kick her out cause she ain't gonna have anything to take care of the baby.

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#75 Old 6th Jul 2006 at 4:26 PM
awwh. this is a good story.
i hope everything turns out for the better!
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